it was good.keep it up.

it was good.keep it up.

Thanks you are so encouraging I appreciate your words and my star. Serena

You always write great poetry and this one is no exception here. I loved the whole concept about the woman following the scent of the sea and then falling asleep to become part of the earth. Lovely imagery here. The picture was absolutely neat, where did you get it?
Keep on writing! :)

I had the picture before the poem and I waited. It wasn't till I had the dream and woke and knew what to write.Glad you enjoyed it. Serena

Elegant in the images you present, Serena. Dreams are a rich universe from which to draw exquisite portraits with words...and you're so good at tapping in there!

How we each see something different.The picture I had just kept me thinking. I even dreamt about it.In my dream the woman stayed to long and soon was a part of the plant life. I wanted to show the dream part or the scary part (the nightmare)of her being swallowed up and was she dying or was it her dream. Always glad to read your nice comments and know you saved my poem thanks. Serena

Salty air, cool ocean water, a long dirt path...a new start, a new life. That's what I 'see'.
Well done Serena.