Bevore reding, I have to look after
"Diminutive" in the dictionary and now I want to read the second chapter!
Yours Sassenach

Thanks to all of you felixthecat,rgabel,gooduklady,and joeparente . I am so new to this and there would have been a lot more to correct if I didn't have my husband edit for me. Thanks again Serena

What a terrific start! You have kept me interested for a great story. Great job and great dialog./joeparente

I thought the notes I sent you regarding spelling were PRIVATE. Did not mean for them to show up here. I apologize. Delete them!

Love it so far, Serena. You have grabbed my attention and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Be sure to send me a note to remind me when you have done it. I sent you some notes regarding minor spelling...you have time to fix those. Great work.

As always on BookRix, a wonderfully interesting story that leaves you hanging wanting to know 'what's next'! Good intrigue, nice and simple. On page 11- when switching back to the POV of the Dr. and her nurse, put a break there, stars or dots, to indicate a scene change. This reader is slow to catch on! LOL Good job! Robynn

First off...the cover is amazing; a mix between Pollock and Monet:) Is this book going to be about an artist?
Whatever...I like the angst that you've portrayed in your protagonist right off the bat. I see a lot of turmoil occurring before the climactic ending!