Thanks glad you enjoyed it. I really do love Christmas but it is the fellowship and the warmth of family and friends. Serena

Really ,its a masterpiece.Wishing all the best in your life.

My last job before I had to go out on my own, was all the displays and set ups for a retail shop.This was so much fun I could just let my imagination run and I miss it. I have a vintage collection of Santas and I just took the picture and him and then the poem came. Glad you enjoyed it. Serena

I thank you for reading it. Serena

Glad you liked it. Serena

And so true in this day and age. Great poem. Only one small change I'd recommend, but I don't really know any rules in poetry so take with a hefty grain of salt.

>"Think visions of credit cards that are pushed to the max,

I change this to:
"Think visions of credit cards pushed to the max,

I don't think you need 'that are' in there to make it work. Besides that one small change, I really liked it.
Best to you with all your work.
Denna

I managed a retail store before the economy tanked. We use to set up for Christmas in July and of course made a fantastic amount of money. I also remember my kids one year getting so much and still wanting more, I was saddened by that. Family and holiday traditions are the best memories of all. Thanks for reading my poem and I do love those stars. Serena

My husband and I were either laughing or pulling our hair out trying to rhyme. Thanks Serena

The rhyming was the hardest part and I had my husbands help. We did have a good time trying to get the right words.I always appreciate getting a star. Thanks Serena

Sereni,

A funny and realistic take on the business of Christmas. Still, in the end the kids will have good memories of the holiday with the family.

Seasons greatings!! Enjoy.

Jack