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sereni

She is wondering if what she is seeing is real or and illusion. If it is true how can she convince others. Serena

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blackbeard

Serena,

Magical Visions, a sense of otherworldliness. This is beautiful and inspired writing but, like Laz, I'm wondering about chimera. Is there something more to come? Half god half human or other creature made up of different parts. Either way, beautiful.

I added it my favourites.

Jack

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felixthecat

Very ethereal, Serena. It shows how deeply your voice has traveled in this poem's sentiments, arriving solidly onto a new plain.
Quite lovely!
Can't wait to read Part 2.
Felix

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gurashlak

You have analyzed the poem in a very beautiful way.It shows that you are reading with lot of interest.

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gurashlak

Really a wonderful piece of work.

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lazarus67

I love the colorful way this poem flows. As you float above this woodland...I'm there with you.
But why the chimera? And which chimera...the Imaginary monster, or the illusion?
Laz