Just started reading the book an i like the narration so far ,the way it flows in and out of the actual story its very exciting to read.Another thing i like is the feeling i get of how somthings going to happan.Keep up the good work i cant wait to find out what happans next.

Well written! It pulled me in as soon as I saw it. The cover's perfect, too! Well done!

Well done!

I've not read the entire thing yet, but so far it is well done.

I love love love this book....I started it yesterday and could not stop reading it. I almost got in trouble at work because I couldn't quit reading it, thats how great it is. Good luck getting it published!

Nice job, Scott. :)

I was pulled into the story from the beginning and I enjoyed placing the scene at a memorial. Eerie and interesting. I thought the story progressed well so far, and I look forward to finishing it soon.

I'm excited to read more of your work in the future.

good book....when you get a chance, read mine...

I liked what I started with "Frightened Boy" I wish you great success with it.

I liked some metonymies:
''the wall of flesh in front of me ''
''to be the fastest rat in the swarm''
''her face is twisted with terror''
''the outside was a fortres to keep people out and the inside a prison to keep them in''
I liked that you paid a lot of attention to details.All of these little details
added together to help immerse the characters in the story.The characters
and the conflicts were introduced in the beginning of a story. The characters were complex, interesting and well defined.

The "Frightened Boy" flows very easily and enlighten. Scott I felt the tone very thought-provoking so far and I will continue to read all of it. Great Job.

Linda B

Great story, great writing. i have not finished it yet, but what i have read i really like. i will finish it as i have time, but I will still vote.