thnx! i appreciate it!

Okay, Soo.. I think this book was kinda rushed but I get that. I have a lot of books that I haven't posted that are rushed. And your grammar needs some work. I can't say I really love the pictures..but they don't bother me. Just letting you know there are two on a page sometimes. But other then that the story is very unoriginal. Instead of just happily ever after you made it real and I like that. Cuz of course life doesn't have HEA. Good job. Keep working on it:)

well the pics are what make it funny!

plz add less pictures i dont like to say the way you think the people should look i like the way they look in my mind. not be rude or anything. and could u also u smaller print? big print annoys me

thanks for the good book.

I really like it; it moves really fast though, but the pictures make for it lol please tell me there's more!

I know it was kinda rushed,but I promise the next one will be much better!Thank 4 reading!

Well...i finsih the story in perhaps about 20 mins...it was really quick and a bit rushed.

The idea was a good idea. So was the pics...I quite enjoyed them :)

I feel that the story was really rushed and that you could work on your grammar and spelling...and details

I hope you enjoyed writing it...thought it needs just a bit more work on it!

Good luck on writing! <3

Review - This is the first time I've read your work. I tried the other book you have up, but it had nothing in it.

You did a different approach by giving pics of your characters. You have the life of a typical teen down, plus their vernacular. I did note some misspellings and some problems with sentence structure.

You have built a budding romance between Drew and your main character. I would say you are about a PG-13 with some of your kissing scenes. Overall, for your age, you've done a good job. Robynn

plz plz plz add more !!! asap :D

Yeah sure I would like that alot!