I couldn't find anyone named Ben in the story, even though he's in the book's blurb, lol! Anyhow, the story has a lot of potential as a very enjoyable - and funny - high school romance. Please take some time and do a little editing, though. The spelling needs to be fixed; if you like, I can send you corrections if you aren't sure which words are misspelled. Also, toward the end during Drake's POV, you switch between speakers... mehr anzeigen
I couldn't find anyone named Ben in the story, even though he's in the book's blurb, lol! Anyhow, the story has a lot of potential as a very enjoyable - and funny - high school romance. Please take some time and do a little editing, though. The spelling needs to be fixed; if you like, I can send you corrections if you aren't sure which words are misspelled. Also, toward the end during Drake's POV, you switch between speakers at length and after a while, since you don't designate who is speaking, it gets a bit confusing. You should probably run both the spell and grammar check before posting any more, but other than that, keep it going!
I love the pictures, especially the teacher - her expression is freakin' hilarious, and the name you give her (Mrs. Spitsalot) had me laughing for real. 'D
