I like the story line its self, but you really need to capitalize correctly.

the last part is funny as hell it was kinda like poetry but not confusing <3ed it:)

LOL i think i like the very last part the most lol (Bus drivers comment LMAO!)

LOL how erotic...lol

Not just a book but a work of art. "The Bus Ride is a fascinating and poetic look at forbidden passion and dancing on the razor's edge of social taboos.

how R I going to read with download
please explain!!!!!!

And who wanted to be exsposed like that,because...

the book was very short but sweet and could actually view some of the scenes.

if i was her i would have had an awsome ride

that was pretty graphic (scared for life) ;)