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Oka Jones

Mostly I just need to know if the concept is likely to be received well by people

Cassie;*

Ok but I gotta go.

Cassie;*

But ill read it while I'm gone.

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The pretty bitch, ONLY.

hello

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Oka Jones

Good how are you?

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Oka Jones

This is the prologue for my book I would
Love people's feedback on it please

VAMPIRE AND THE WEREWOLF

It was a clear summer night in early January down the long and sometimes very lonely Eyre highway which takes you from Western Australia to South Australia. There was a slight cooling breeze flowing through the air, it had been a hot and energy sapping thirty nine degree day but now it was only around nineteen degrees and very... mehr anzeigen

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The pretty bitch, ONLY.

Go for it ilove it

Oka Jones

Thanks

The pretty bitch, ONLY.

just saying the truth

Oka Jones

What did you like about it?
Just trying to gage what might need to be changed

The pretty bitch, ONLY.

honestly i like it all

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Oka Jones

Hi I'm new here was just wondering how this works