Topnotch flash fiction!

it made me feel like I was there. I could fell the guys last moments. That was a good read and I hope as many people can can read this.

I enjoyed the way this piece was written, it really brought me into the mind of the assassin, though the adbruptness of the ending was slightly disappointing. I would have liked to have felt his pain, experienced the bullet entering his skin. Very nicely done, just a bit short.

add moree!!!

Just really nice writing, Lucia. Your rendering of the anti-hero was poignant.
Political agendas and ALL the victims they have been responsible for haven't changed much in mankind's long history.

You have the gift. The cadence, tone and story work together with flawless grace. Thank you.

That said, a few technical details should be addressed.
1st, put the dialogue in proper format (in quotations, no preceding hyphen and not bold.)
2nd, I'd nix the beginning and ending Onomatopoeias. I like how it sounds, and it would work well in film, but it does not read well.
3rd ans last, if a shotgun is being used, it will be most-likely loaded with shot and not a single bullet. If it were a single bullet, it should be referred to as a slug.

I hope you don't feel like I'm trying to tear your story apart. I honestly love it and your style. I'll be back to vote.

This is a very impressive piece of flash fiction and you are to be congratulated. It sounded quite professional and I was blown away by your talent.

I spotted two small errors. Fix them, and you will have a real shot at the prize.

On the first page: Every smoke allowed death to get on step (should be "one step").

Page 6 - "He would not squabble in the dirt." Squabble means to argue. I think you intended to say "scramble" or something like that.

Apart from those two tiny errors, job well done.

I absolutely loved the way you described the assassin, comparing him to James Bond, I presume. That was perfect and so descriptive! Great story! I'm a fan!

You do have some typos, like 'freighting', which i assume you wanted to say 'frightening'.

There are some sentences that don't sound like what you wanted to say.

Pg1: chained to a bed, counting how many seconds he was still alive.

I think you wanted to say: counting the seconds he still had to live.

Apart from that, i enjoyed reading it, well done and goodluck.