I'm Doing a chapter a day.
This book was originally for my friends. but why hide the fan fiction luv. so to keep them guessing i write a chapter a day (i'm accually winging it). I guess i'm writing what i know (i mean thats what they all say write what you know) Well i know i luv 1D and so do my friends so i put us in my book!! Soo I guess what im trying to say is thanx,
Roxii
tell me when you finish!!!!or update!!
Tell me where and i will go back and fix them
Thanx,
Roxii
its good but you need to go back and add some words where they are needed.
However, be careful with your grammar and the use of a real band performing at a fictional school. While it would be okay to say "Abigail and Caroline listened to a One Direction song," it may be a little bit risky to have them perform at a fictional school. Other than that, your story was fine.