Thanks its called Lost and Forgotten

Hey I was just wondering if you could do a quick review on my book 'Not Your Ordinary Teenagers'? It only has a few chapters and it would be great if you could just tell me if I'm going ok. Thankyou!

p.s I love your books they're so creative! :)

Hi you sent me a message im sory i didnt reply not been on in a few weeks but i have uploaded the first few sample pages of my new book The Roses I hope you cn reaad it nd i'll reed urs as soon as i cn.
caoix

I liked your In Plain Sight story;it rocked! You don't have to read the whole thing - it's not a short story, but a chapter book - but it wouldbe cool if you could read a bit of my book, The Legend of the Lost Goddess, please. I would like some more feedback, and you're pretty good about that, :).

when you get time please continue with the reviews on my short story apocalypse thankyou:)

Sure! I'd love to read your book. If you wouldn't mind, I would like it if you read my book Elementess. It still needs a lot of work, but no one will tell me what needs work. They tell me "it needs some editing and revising..." on what?!? But yeah I'll leave a comment.
Icygem1300

Hey there,
I'm happy to check out In Plain Sight. I'll be sure to leave a comment and if it's really good I'll add it to my favorites. I like to read and share with my friends.

I only have four stories posted at the moment and one is a Drabble I did for practice. Eternal Curse is my big story that I've gotten some good feedback on. I'm planning to publish it soon. I'd love your feedback as well. My other two stories are short but very good also. You can check them out on my pinboard if you'd like.

Toi

I loved In Plain Sight - it was written with a true "detective's" eye. 8D

If you could return the favor by taking a look at my short piece To The Last, I would be very grateful.

Also, might I recommend a mystery from another member? Jack A. Ling's The Case In the Murders of Monroe is a tale all mystery-loving fans should take a look at.

http://www.bookrix.com/_title-en-jack-a-ling-the-case-in-the-murders-of-monroe

Enjoy!

Hey I just uploaded another book and it's only one chapter but I wondered if yu could read it? It's called The Adventures of Beeron Glugly.
It's something new I'm just experimenting with and I'd like to see what yu think.
Thanks :)
Arthur

Thanks for the comment! I'll fix my mistakes! And don't worry, I'm keeping it PG or PG-13. Is there any other mistakes? I wanna fix most of them(: