This is an amazing story in such few words. Very compelling.

I'm not sure if I care for the time jumps - but they weren't so bothersome in a second reading.

Perhaps Gramps comes to the aid so often that he loses a bit of credibility - or Sara just needs a lot of saving.

Overall a touching little ghost-story of sorts. Well worth a read (and a vote) and indicative of a greater talent.

Clearly superior.

Mesmerizing and engaging story. You have a gift! I voted.

What an amazing writer you are! Other than to tell you I'm giving this a vote, too, I'm speechless at the beauty of your story.

This one...when I was so tired of reading entries...grabbed me. Really, really good. My vote.

drop a V...p

Loved your story, oh that we all had a grandpa just like Sarah had watch over, and protect us. You have my vote. Serena

really beautiful story

As always, you touch me with your words. You have my vote! Valerie

Very nicely done. You have the ability to make people feel emotion in a few pages, thats rare.