Wow Miguel,
Your blurb for the story alone will really make people want to read it. Bravo!

and I give my vote for your book...
it is great and ich hope you will be the winner.

;)

take care

petra

I've read few pages so far and I find it interesting and special.I like your style too. Will read the rest soon. You got my vote.

Well, I'm so surprised! And I must confess that HAPPY! Thanks paigecarter & milunatuani for your words. And all the rest for taking a few minutes for reading and voting. Wow... :)

hello, great story, good luck best wiches, miluna

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Thanks Sjhanson for your kind comment!! I will to hear your opinion when you finish it!

I'm no literary expert, but this makes me think of Kafka, Camus and maybe a few others that made up high school and college reading lists. You have a very interesting style, at least from what I've read so far. I can't read it all in one sitting, so I've downloaded it to my kindle so I can take it with me and read as I find the time.
Very enjoyable. I'm looking forward to continuing.
Kudos to your mother as well, for such a fine translation.

I solved the problem! Now you can read it online, it's bigger. Sorry about that, it took me a while to understand how it worked!! :-)

Maybe you want to reformat this book and upload it again. It is rather annoying to read this in current form. I couldn't get past page 5.