What a touching short story. It made me so angry. I constantly said, "Don't go with him, somethings NOT right" as if Destiny could hear me.

Powerful!!!
LaJune Marie

Thank you so much for taking the time to read, comment, and the heart.

I will be reading more of your work as well.

Tonya

Powerful images move this story from innocence to darkness.

You did a good job of evoking that horror.
I look forward to reading your other stories.

Cheers,

Mitch

Your choice of words allowed readers to go on Destiny's nightmare with her! I'm not only sympathetic but empathetic as well! I applaud you being able to write something like this. Look forward to reading your other works! Keep writing! :)

Thank you for reading, commenting, and giving my book a heart. :)

Thank you for reading, commenting and voting on my book. :)

that unfortunately unfolds too often than not.

Voted...not sure about any clues though.

Another story of brutality...from two fronts. The images are so very disturbing, Tonya...it's difficult to read stories like this, but thank you for the reminder. Again.

The innocents:(

You have my heart & vote for this story.
Chris