A very nice children's story. Nice job!

Thank you

Thank you so much. I appreciate the vote.

vote...p

can i have a ring like that too?

This was such a lovely story and takes me back to my younger days where I believed in magical wishes. You have my vote. Serena

Such a sweet and cute story. I like the way you wrote it too. You definitely have my vote.

You have my vote.
Chris :D

I will be sure to make the necessary changes.
:)

This is a nice children’s book, except that you need to capitalize words referring to as name of a person (e.g.: “Look Mom and Dad . . .”). Just a thought to ponder on: what happens when somebody believe in making wishes come true that depends on some earthly things? I guess you need to make a longer version of this story. I am giving you much workload to do. LOL! I hope this helps. You have the skill to write good stories. Go for it!