and i think that the visitor is that cat that turns into a man

I got chills just looking at the cover!!! :)

Great! I loved it. It was a wonderfully written and highly detailed story. I enjoyed it very much. I was hoping it was longer and would get more exciting.

wuz up. Hey i know why u got that first place. because u wrote a hell of a book

this book is great

I'm sorry it took me so long to complete reading the story but I was right to give you my vote.
It's really a scary one. All these days I couldn't read at nights because I had nightmares about it, that's the reason that I couldn't finish soon.

I really enjoyed reading this story! I loved all the descriptive details, and the attention you paid to the development of the plot to make sure that everything remained consistent. Such a wonderful writer, and I know you will go far. Thank you for this!

Really nice attention to detail. I like the way you developed the atmosphere from the outset by layering all the descriptive prose. It set the rest of the plot up very nicely. Great story!

Read from page 10 to 23 of THE GOOD FORTUNE OF FOOLS... there you will find a story and a Voice.

Boring! Too literal and way too much hyperbole. I was waiting for you to describe the molecules that composed their clothing. What is with all the detail? Get on with the story. I think you are too hung up on words than getting to the gist of the story. You could have written the story in half the words. What do I care if she opened the door and looked down the hall? Get on with it! You need to read more books. I do admire your productivity and tenacity, but put it to good use. What is with all these readers? Are they afraid to be honest? It is not helpful to your growth as a writer if your friends merely want to pacify you. Come on people take time to think about what you read and be honest when you write a critique. Finally, I read no original voice in your writing. Seems to me you still have to find it.