I went through only first 30 pages but that is enough to say that ur book deserves vote. I'll finish the book later and comment on it.

- what I had failed to do was leave a note so you would know I had been here...I remember Boo aka Solstice - a good story to me is one that I can recall not only generally but specifically and you have that knack...Paula

I have to admire you for being able to put thoughts into words and have them tell a story... Especially an original one.

Great work!!

Highly recommeded

As usual, a compelling read. Loved it.

Great pace. I liked the concept and voted :)

Totally awesome with all the suspense building up with every scene. Love the dream and the climax. Glad both girls emerged alive though :) The great story and writing made me flip through each page. Nothing much to say but to leave a star and a trophy :)

nice story and nice flow...the character build is very well done.

This is a terrific story, well done Bek. I get the feeling this has roots in your past job. But I don't plan to tell anyone.

Voted and starred!
A cautionary note: Be careful that you do not write words over the readers head. The beginning was that way. You smoothed it out perfectly later in the story. Good job!/joeparente