Wow I really like this story! Everything about it was wonderful!

The only thing I thought was a little strange was the conversation about the glasses. It seems like the whole glasses thing would be a private way of understanding the world and it seems it would be sort of unlikely that both sisters understood the world in that same way.

But that's just how I see things. Good luck!

I liked the story and the theme you tackled. The concept of the glasses is clever for me, because it can be interpreted metaphorically too. Good luck.

Thanks loads Chelsea. I pondered for some time on how to make my ideas more accessible to the reader. I worked on puncuation and also reforming of the story so that I could get my point across. I too feel I have to read this work slowly, but also feel so satisfied when I find what I say making sense. I do think I should have popped a hyphen in between chameleon and like (chameleon-like) and it would have sounded so much better.

Thanks,

Bek

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian

Nice job! Would like to read more books from you.