Wow... this is awesome! I'm excited to see what becomes of the characters... you've created some very unique personalities, and written the first part of their story well. Please let me know when you add to this...

to find such an original and trippy story and someone stringing the words together with such a command for the English language is sick! I pity the poor fool who plays scrabble against you rebeckdawn.
WOW. Fantastic Story.
Lions.

A magical/ miracle pencil with a name...I'm hooked :D

Love it.

Very fun to read. I was disapointed when i got to the last page and saw there was no more.

I'm glad to have read this delightful story, perhaps I was fated to read it.

Like Felix, I think it reaches more than just children, but your targeted audience well surely love this. Your words painted a picture so vivid that I found myself looking at my Howard with a questioning eye...LOL!

Wonderful story, you are indeed a excellent writer, one I will be keeping my eye on as well as this story.

This isn't really a children's story...although it fits well into that genre...it is a deeply philosophical work!
How delightful that Chris "happened" upon (or over) Howard--how fortunate for the young boy indeed! Was the meeting fated? I for one want to believe it was:) And Susie...the short scene was inspiring. But, it all ended too soon, as so many wonderful things do.
I have a feeling we'll meet up with this trio again, very soon. At least I hope we will.
Think "Howard" :)

I'm glad I had the honor of being the first because I'm positive I won't be the last. I love your vibrant vocabulary and unique descriptive quality; it's something to be admired with envy! Well done! I'm a fan!