This was really good. Short and packed a punch. Thanks for shocking me at the end.

I wish to take this time to thank all who have taken the time to read my entry. Your support was very much appreciated. Charlie

Great story. Surprising, yet interesting.

Charlie, I wanted to add to my earlier comment. Your story reminds me of an Alfred Hitchcock episode. I'm a big fan of his. How nice of you to pay homage to the Master of Suspense! Your tale has a very clever twist of fate. Super job with this one!

The ending shocked me no end. Very good story.

I wis to thank all who read and critiqued my story. The hearts and votes are also greatly appreciated. Charlie

Considering this as a Flash Fiction Entry, you've done considerably well. I don't want to sound heinous but I disagree with lucky97 that "Nobody just goes and kills a man just because of some problems". The fact is you need to put yourself in the subject's position. His wife has been raped, her emotions shattered. You can't expect a loving husband 'not' to act compulsively.

It's is a nice Psychological flick, and I being an avid reader of this genre, like the concept. So I voted even if there were a few typos.

I hope this is not called 'sugar-coated' criticism.

Goodluck reallynola,
Prakash

Interesting ending and creative plotting. I voted.

I am going to be completely and totally honest with you. There were some grammar mistakes, starting with the uncapitalized title. The plot was sort of strange, too. Nobody just goes and kills a man just because of some problems. That part of the story didn't seem real, and almost makes it seem like the man in the story is taking murder lightly. Maybe I didn't understand something, but thats what I got from it.
The first sentence is strange, just to give you an example. You might want to look that over.
The description was good though, and makes it a truly creepy read. I'm sure that is what you want to accomplish, however, so im not worried about that.
I'm sorry if I come off as harsh, but I don't like to sugarcoat critisism too much. Your story was certainly original, and interesting. I hope your story benefits from my thoughts:)

You're kidding. This is a really good story. I'm voting for it.