When I first saw this was so short I was a little worried. Wow! I wouldn't change anything as far as the story goes. This is perfect flash fiction. A couple awkward sentences in the beginning, but nothing terrible. Good job and definitely deserves a vote if you enter it in something. This one will stick with me for a while. :-)
I have a story up in the family contest called Nana's love. I would very much like to hear what you... mehr anzeigen
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