u r good @ makin stories and lol to that one part 'someting poking her' lol btw diva1999.books thats a too fast ending but yeah she should add it to her story

but this is pro-Jacob Twilight saga fan fiction that doesn't involve Nessie, which is really rare

jacob is so fine

omg this was so good here is my added part of the story

the next day bell went to jacobs house . hey jake you know i was thinking i really love you so we should got married.
yeah anyways i was going to come ask you if you wanted to get married. well ijust said yes lets go to your room and talk.
ok
as i walked to jake room i noticed that i really did love him so i sat down and we just started talking. we can`t tell my dad ok we gotta wait two years but we can hied our marriage ok
o k bella
do you wana make out
yeah sure
we started kissing and we started taking off our cloths next thing you know we were done getting busy i was so suprised. jake are you ok
yeah of course
th next day i been feel kinfd of nousis so i took a pregancy test i found out i was pregnant i drove over to jakes house
jake can i talk to you alone
sure babe wats wrong
i`m pregnant
ooo well now we have to tell your dad
no were going to runaway and leave them a note and tell them that we are safe and we will be back in 1 year on now go pack your stauff and ill meet you in the woods 45 min ok .

i told you thats a good part to add to your story

this book is crap

more!

who is this by, it is kinda bad, no affence...

LUV IT KEEP ON MAKIN BOOKS THAT WAZ TOTALLY AWESOME...REALLY GUD..!!**

This b0ok is so fing amazing so far,.cant wait to read more and reccomend this book to all my friends!!!

i absolutly loved it this is now my fav. book please coutinue the series