i wont to read more about teddy tip

....says it all.
Very sweet tribute to 'Teddy Tip'. Beautiful front cover as well.

and.... you left me wanting more! tell us more stories about Teddy Tip. like the picture.

Good beginning. I liked it. Now imagine what would happen if Teddy Tip, met Lemony. It could be the start of a supper good story. Keep writing. :-)

~~Carmen

My first comment was sent twice and no way to delete the second comment. Soooo...good job on this short story.

Surely...it could have been a little bit longer. The writing style and grammar was good for such a young writer.

that was cool but it was to short

I loved it,wish i could hear more about Teddy Tip.

Chargrill3E

It great lovely dog well done