Hey, could you just publish this on Bookrix? My devices aren't compatible with Apple, and so I can't read the full version. Thanks!
-Sweetcakes44
Looks great. I love the whole premise. Needs a little more editing but its really good. You have a fantastic imagination. Keep writing! :)
I wrote 194 pages, I don't think you read them yet as the site publishes the full version in 3 days :) but thanks
wow... very interesting Bella, hope you edit it soon can't wait to read the finishing and the second book
Thank you so much! It's actually 194 pages so far, but it won't be available yet, in 2 days 3 it will, thanks again!
no problem, hey whar are friends for. :))
it's available to buy on itunes or amazon for 0.00
Its interesting. I like the "New World Order" type theme. I would definitely want to read more. I'm hooked.
Oh cool it's for free? Then yeah I'll definitely check it out.
yep for free, check if you can read it with book rix or click on buy and it loads on amazon or itunes click 0.00 buy but yeh its free
Alright. I'll let you know if I can read it on bookrix.
Apologies for the mistakes in the info section, but it will be edited again, I just wanted to make it available for readers out there to share their opinions, feel free to leave a comment about it if perhaps you find a few spelling errors and so on.
Bella.
Saw the post for this and read it right away. Your concept is magnificent. It's a unique twist on a possible future based on logical conclusions about what's happening today. That makes it real and worth reading.
You have some major issues with tense and format, as well as a few spelling errors and syntax problems. The good news, however, is that none of these are awful, and all them are easily fixed. I can do a basic edit for... mehr anzeigen
No it's my computer. It's always done that. I used Google docs too, but it's old and it blocks, so I wrote it on here.
Thanks/
Wow. That has to be driving you crazy, lol!
A lot haha, I'll let you know. Thanks
Interesting story of the perfect world. No hunger, no dangers, no misery. But just one job, one religion, one language, and only rarely dangerous ideas ... whether this brave new world remains in the further course of the novel?
Perfect ideas for the future of the mankind..., or maybe not?
Thanks Justin, it will soon be all available, it's around 130 pages long, while I'll edit it for a while. Also, I'm currently writing a prequel of this series, a short book which will explain the Perfect Utopia. Which doesn't get explained much in Deep Breath.
Hey, it's great. I'll wait for the full version Bella. Good job.
Great Melissa, thanks!
I like it, it reminds me of The 100 quite a bit.
Thanks!!!
I've enjoyed the first pages so far. Looking forward to reading it all.
Thank you Giorgio, much appreciated.
Cannot wait for the full version, this looks intriguing.
Awesome!
Try check it now, the full version is on bookrix, you should be able to view it here.
Okay, thanks!
you can buy it on amazon or itunes although its on for 0.00