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wildgoose

Hi, feedback on Coma . Good cover. interesting plot; memory loss ,choosing,and I like the twist at the end where she discovers the true one through the actions of another.And you keep an intense focus on love all the way through. As a guy your guys characters seem a little brittle and uncaring, not much depth; guys are just people too and have complex emotions. Still all the more reason to do field research!
wildgoose

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The Twister

Omigosh! I freaking love you! <3 I'm so happy that you had given me a very detailed feedback! I will take note of your feedback, to keep the story interesting XD I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! Thanks Wildgoose <3

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wildgoose

hi, thanks for friends request

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The Twister

No worries XD

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Gelöschter User

Hi munchkin, how ya Been? I miss u and im bored...lol

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The Twister

Haha I'm doing fine, just getting ready for school :/

Gelöschter User

Wow, the same here...lol

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♥Addo♥

tnx for the FR

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The Twister

Tbh not really, a few things but some is from school and doing stupid stuff with my family XP

♥Addo♥

what happened in school?

The Twister

There's like this guy freaking out my friend, he legits keeps staring at her and I know I shouldn't judge but its creepy :/ and there's been fights happening around the neighbourhood of where I live. So I'm scared

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Gelöschter User

Tell me when you update all of your books...XD

Gelöschter User

kk thank you

The Twister

Hey Ari, How ya been?? Just updated Complicated love, I hope you enjoy it. Would really love your opinion!! tc luv ya girl <3

Gelöschter User

Hiii, omg thank you soo much!!!Of course.....Luv ya too...;D

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teguh

Thanks. Nice to meet you.

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Darkness

NIGHTMARE MOON WANTS 2 B UR FRIEND!!

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The Twister

MY LITTLE PONY O.O I'll be your friend ^.^

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Gelöschter User

Thanks, I guess for the friend request.

Gelöschter User

Oh that's cool. And yeah I am. She choose everything. My page, My name everything. XD

The Twister

Aww cute ^.^

Gelöschter User

Yeah! But Thanks for the friend request though!

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Gelöschter User

Wow, is that the whole Twister family up there? :)

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The Twister

YASSS!! XD

Gelöschter User

Hahaha, very nice :)

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Rocking_Girls_Mary&Kimberly546

hey twister

The Twister

Hey girl, I just came back from the laundry and it's like 11:11pm, my family does the washing at night, less people at the laundry mat but I'll check your book tomorrow

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