Hi, feedback on Coma . Good cover. interesting plot; memory loss ,choosing,and I like the twist at the end where she discovers the true one through the actions of another.And you keep an intense focus on love all the way through. As a guy your guys characters seem a little brittle and uncaring, not much depth; guys are just people too and have complex emotions. Still all the more reason to do field research!
wildgoose
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Omigosh! I freaking love you! <3 I'm so happy that you had given me a very detailed feedback! I will take note of your feedback, to keep the story interesting XD I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! Thanks Wildgoose <3