Nausea in the Brain? That's different, but I enjoyed it. After this contest, you might consider drawing this story out a bit longer. It could be a Doozie!
I voted for you.
Augustus.
Well done. You have my vote. All the best to you Val
I had no problem returning & voting for your story.
Chris
I liked the way you maintained a feeling of suspense all the way through, and the ending really caught me off guard (even though I KNEW something was up, I just didn't know what).
A fantastic read, and it's sure to do well in the contest.
My kinda stuff. It was quite subtle and then at the last hurdle you give it a super twist. An FFF: Fine Flash fiction. I'm voting for this one.
Well done
Wendyxx
This story is good. You can make a longer version. You have the potential to become a good author someday. Keep it up!
I enjoyed your book and especially the surprise ending. You are a very good writer.