I really enjoyed your story, and the ending was a real surprise. Good job Serena

This was really good, I don't see why you were so against uploading it. A lot of people like it. Like ladawn28 said, I'm waiting to see what happens next.

I was originally against uploading this story. But one of my friends got at my nerves to do it.

Thank you for the feedback. I will try my best to fare better next time.

Prakash

i really enjoyed this story i am new to this site and have read a few stories but this one has me waiting for what u r going to do next

I was pulled in to your story right away. You write in the "western" style, which is unusual for someone who is from India, which definitely made the whole thing easy to follow. I like your story line and surprise ending. Prakash, I am impressed and hope you will continue to write and entertain us with your excellent work.