i'm a proofreader and i suggest u get one if u continue writing. several, and i mean 100's, of misspelled words and punctuation in the wrong places. repeat of several bedroom scenes. i read the book but it was difficult to get thru because of so many errors. plot was good but was overshadowed by so many errors. keep up the good work, u do have talent but plz get a proofreader who can go line by line to clean up the issues with spelling and punctuation. good luck to you.

awesome had me on the edge of my seat and eyes on my laptop screen keep this up and you will be famous

your book was very interesting and i think you would make an awsome author but their are a lot of spelling errors and some of the things you keep repeating over and over you could try and work on that but it was an awsome book