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This was very well done, Paula. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for sharing it.
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This was very well done, Paula. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for sharing it.
A verbal collage shot through a photon cannon - a summary weaving together theology, psychology and history - that explodes into a second "big bang". Not your usual kind of tale, more poetry than prose, and very moving. I hope you write more like this.
This is quite interesting that I have to read it twice. It’s a thought provoking book. You should have entered this in our EOW Contest. But this is a good entry for our Flash Fiction Story, too. Good luck!
I read fast by habit and in this story there is no pause so I've had to return to previous parts to re-read. Had issues. Might it be the Devil claps and not God.
This is such a different style of writing for you I enjoyed it immeasurably.Serena
Very good work, Paula.
This is so different than your childrens' stories. It really shows that you are quite capable of writing in more than one genre. Keep us enthralled.
Michael.
That piece moved so quickly, and said so much with so few words. The message was powerful and very moving. This was great!
