:) Great story and writing. And I'm a fan of the ghosts...lol. Love the twist in the end. Thanks for the read :)

Hi Paula,

I enjoyed the read. I think your transitions were fine, or is it transaction, lol.

I wondered about the ghosts, it took me a second to work it out. You shouldn't have to spell things out for the reader, but I wondered what the ghosts motives were.

Great read. If the middle bit had happened to me, I'd have freaked.

Bek :)

Hima and Rgabel who also have stories in the contest...thank you for stopping by and taking the time to leave a note.

Believe it or not the middle story happened and I actually ended up with a black eye from the cot hitting when it fell - thank God it only had clothes on it!

As to the ghosts well...I think their nightmare is still going on and on and on...

nice story

What more can I say, but good job! I like the dialogue of the characters. I hope I did not miss out the contest voting. Please remind me to vote. Good luck!

Nicely done. I liked the ghosts, they sounded like characters! Would like a little more fleshing of the personalities of the couple. Good job!

The main story did happen and ghosts - well we know they are pranksters.

All of the civil war battlefields and truly when you think of it, all battlefields are grave yards...p

The transactions need a little work but the story was okay.
God bless

amitava, ankitaverma19,briandoswell,and ferminromeodetorres for your kind and quick reading and feedback!

Truth to tell - the main story happened - the ghosts of the battle I gave life due to the circumstances that occurred that night in the woods.

I love the way you ran the two couples side by side. I'll certainly come back and vote for you when the voting starts.