Beth, thank you for writing this emotional short story. It filled me with so much anticipation as i read each line clinging to each word. Excellent....Excellent Job!
LaJune Marie
wow i love this book and it even made me cry!!!
this is an amazing story. i don't even know what to write, except that you are obviously very talented and now i have to go and read all the rest of your work!
great job!
Beth,
This story reminds me of my first true love and some of the things that took place when we broke up years ago, but we remained friends until he passed away last week.
A very touching and beautiful piece. I like how you described the goodbye kiss.
Excellent writing!