Wow, if I had half the talent you had I'd be going somewhere far in life; sadly I don't. Love it.

This is amazing. The whole time, I was trying to figure out how their lives would all intertwine, but... The ending was so unexpected.

I don't even really know what to say. Every once in a while I read something and I loved it so much that I really can't think of anything else to say about it but the cliches like "amazing" and "beautiful" and all that. And I can't outline what I like about those stories because it's everything (the word choice, the story, the little details, everything) that I like about it.
This is one of those stories.

Wow, that was amazing. I am beginning to wonder if there is even a point to enter something in the Young Writer of the Year contest if I will be competeing against you. Outstanding!

That was good! It was really realistic and detailed (I love details so much that my agent is making me cut 1/6 of my book because there are too many details) The ending... Eesh! That was a shocker! Good job on this!

Loved it. Are there still cookies available? Haha!

This is a clever concept and beautifully written work of prose. The descriptive narrative flows well and draws in the reader, without being intrusive.

The characters are well defined but, not overtly so for this short piece of flash. It's just enough to allow the reader to identify with each of them.

Then the necessary punch line, the kicker of every good piece of flash, which has us, saying WOW! Kudos Beth!

Carol x

as some one who was born and raised in NY, the mention of a plane flying very low is very chilling and yet you made it work so well. I never understood how any of the people would connect when I first began your story, I almost cringed because my head was taking this in so many different directions. Thankfully you managed to clear that up :) This was an amazing story

...I did NOT see that ending coming! I was wondering how their lives were all going to collide...

Excellently written, as usual. And your DESCRIPTION!!! Way to go Beth!!

Oh my god THAT ENDING!!

This short story starts with a smooth event to hook the reader to read more. The story then moves on with a smooth transition. The author has made this story an interesting read by the way the events are connected to one another smoothly. The story takes the twist when all the characters gather at the restaurant and the unexpected climax at the end would shock the reader. Yet, the author has left the end for the reader to decide. As a reader, I wish a happy ending.