I really enjoyed this short story. It was beautifully written and caputres the moment perfectly. :)

The ending gave me chills and almost made me cry! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! <3

Another absolutely brilliant story from our resident junior genius. Paper.planes - Beth - I am blown away by not only your imagination but by your writing skills. I envy them more than you can know. You are a true story-teller, able to not only engage us from the start, but keep us entranced with your detailed and very realistic descriptions of people, their surroundings and their innermost thoughts.

A winner if ever I saw one!