Absolutely wonderful. I am so glad gooduklady asked me to read this. You are very talented. I was crying at the end.

I can't even articulate how much these kind words mean to me. Thank-you so much for the comments, everyone!

I'm not sure what to say. This is one of the best pieces of writing I've come across.

I should be reading this in a print magazine somewhere.

This is amazing.

Two words: Fan. Tastic.

Vivid prose, compelling story...it doesn't get much better than this. Excellent work!

Now I'm really angry, because you've forced me to go back and read ALL of your stories. This is so very very good in so many ways.

Good Stuff Girl!!!!!!!!!!!

Nicely done. It's difficult to find books like this... books that actually make you feel something.

Good write!

Review - Written well, intriguing story. You were able to feel, be, and describe the journey of his illness quite well. Definitely a twist to the story I didn't see coming, though I wondered about where Anna was in the beginning. What you did most skillfully was keep the reader informed as to whether it was a waking moment, or the escape to a dream. This is very hard to do, and keep the reader on track. Definitely kept my interest engaged to the end. Excellent job. Robynn

This was a very beautiful story. You have a great writing talent!