WOW! You can Write!
Very professional and smooth. Good solid foundation for the story. Like that you don't try to answer all the questions and that you gave us 'exactly' what's needed and nothing more. It's always a shock (hate to say) when I see a book that's polished and smooth. It's smoother than my own! Editing and such..
One complaint - ten pages is lame.
Lame! Lame! Lame! A tease.
This is good stuff, but.. why so stingy? More pages Panther.
So spoke the Lion.