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i lov it plez write more i lov it plezzz write mor :D
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i lov it plez write more i lov it plezzz write mor :D
Excellent beginning, i'd love to see where you go with this
Annie x
plz plz finish
I actualy don't really use this site much I use another site to post all of my writing. I've actualy finished this and posted it in https://www.wattpad.com under the same title and usernameso of you want to read the rest it's there along with some other stuff I've written. Sorry to be so awkward. Xxxxxx
omfg i so love this book!!! Who ever did this you are kool make more of this !
Aww thanks! Glad you like it ;)
I've actualy finished writing this but it's only posted on https://www.wattpad.com under the same title and username. Sorry about that but I don't really use this site much. Xxxx
You should really put the other part on here(: i would love that itsz hard to read the second part on that other website
you were great i love readin books on here, because its people wrighting them not pro"sz and i think that you are a really good wrighter can"t wait to read more of your booksz(:
Thank you so much. Xxxxx :)
Short critique here. Spellcheck is on the computer for a reason. I found way to many misspelled words. In a few places it seemed you were confused. She got to school so early and then was late? I might have missed the sub meaning here. All in all it was a really nice peice. Interesting from start to finish and left me wanting more. I do hope there is more. I am looking forward to it. True talent here, just needs a bit of refining.
Yeah I agree on all acounts - I guess I need to seriously consider learning to proof read lol. When I posted this on here it was the first thing I had ever written and I was so proud if it but looking back and Reading some if the comments I realised that I actualy didn't really... mehr anzeigen
That was so good you have to keep writing whats going to happen between them i want to know so badly. please keep writing.
Lol thank you I'm glad you like it. Actualy I have finished this and am already on the sequel but I don't realy use this site very much. If you wanted to read the rest of it then I have posted it on https://www.wattpad.com under the same username and title. I have also posted... mehr anzeigen
Aww thank you!! I've actualy finished since I don't really use this site much I haven upload it on here. The whole thing and more of my writing is on https://www.wattpad.com - if you search paigemae23 it should be there if you wanted to see the rest. Lol, sorry for being awkward ;). Xxxx