Yeah i went on there and read the whole thing, i litteraly stayed up until like six in the morning to finish it all lol it was great<3

Oh thank you. I'm really glad you liked it. I haven't actualy put the whole story on here but if you want to read it all I have the whole thing uploaded on https://www.wattpad.com and my username there is the same as here. I've also got some other stuff on there if you wanted to check it out because I don't really use this sit much. Anyway thank you. Xxxxx

You are truely an amazing writter, this is a very intriguing story, i loved it (:

IT IS INTERESTING

this book is awesome i hope you make anther one soon! :D

this book is awesome i hope you make anther one soon! :D but i think they should end up together in the end!

this book is awesome i hope you make anther one soon! :D

this book is awesome i hope you make anther one soon! :D

You have a very free verse style of writing, and its magnificent. I hope to read more of your story in book form. You are very talented and you should know that you've earned my vote. Good luck in the contest. Don't ever give up on writing, it's your calling.
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this was really good! hope for more!!!!