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RedruMKilleR

I have not read this book yet. I look forward to reading it! :) Althou i am an 11 year old child i do love reading books and school! I enjoy reading books like these, to get some of the stress off my mind, and let the relief inside my mind! :D I am actually going to read this book... RIGHT NOW! :DDDDDD I can't wait to see what happens!!!! *exited*

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kittykat

no offense but kinda boring still good work lots think this is a good book

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judia66

I enjoyed this very much! I will look forward to more from this author.

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orangechickens

Please please pleaseee update

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kasper5

i would lyk to read cmplete book.as sm questns r nt yt ansrd

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angelscupcakes

so good,please keep writting

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littlebit06914

plz finish..............

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Gelöschter User

I tried to read the first few pages, but i didn't buy into the characters. You were so focused on convincing readers about their vampirism, that you didn't give the characters enough personality. They didn't feel real at all, and i quickly lost interest. I would recommend going back and editing, but this is just my advice. There is potential there!

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rayray2172

FANTASTIC!

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i actually read this book last year but never commented. I really liked it.

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