I would appreciate it so very very much if you would read the beginning of my story and then give me some feedback and in-put.
Your opinions are greatly valued!
http://www.bookrix.com/book.html?bookID=th113f68fc0e725_1455445385.5859789848#1674,558,2322

Here is the Description: Enjoy! ;)

Laurel Carter has lost everything.
Stuck in an insane asylum that is beginning to destroy her.
She is losing hope and discovering loneliness.
That is, until she meets Ashley Larkin.
His enchanting demeanor and charming smiles a threat to her self-centered prejudices...she wants him...only him.


She has no idea.
There never was a choice to begin with.

Wait! Why isn't this book completed? I need updates please

LOVELY STORY

please update this book is soooooooo good

READ ON OR DIE TONIGHT AT 10:35 P.M 9 years ago a person named Jerry got dared to sleep in a house that was believed haunted. The next day his friends waited for him outside the house...... They had to go inside and search for him. They went through every room exept the attic. He wasn't supposed to sleep there. He was supposed to sleep in the living room they went to the attic
. They saw Jerry's corpse and they just left because they were scared. But that night they all died because of their friend. He killed them for making him sleep in that house if you don't send this to 11 comments you will die tonight by Jerry. Example 1: A man named Stewart read this and didn't believe it. He shut off his computer and went through his day. That night while he was in bed he heard something outside of his door. He got up to look. And now he's dead. Example 2: a girl named Haley read this in the morning and she got scared but she didn't send it. She wanted to now if it was true. She went to school (She was only 13 years old) and that night she died. If you don't post this on 11 comments Jerry will 'visit' you his isn't fake. Apperently if you copy and past this to ten comments in the next ten minuets you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. You will either get kissed or asked out, if you brake this chain you will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. In the next 53 minuets someone will say I love you or I'm sorry

You have to update. I read it last year, but I haven't seen any progress. I don't think she dies though....Everyone has one question in mind that is the same. Who is the mysterious person? For some reason I'm thinking that Elizabeth isn't dead though....Please update everyone is eager to find out the end.

Sonn please add more!!!!

Was that all? I mean... it had not yet ended right?
Update soon please.. :)

What happened after that...?
Can you please finish it, it's a great book!

I don't like when I see a book and want to read it and then I see all these comments saying it was good and you have to finish it, I don't like when I read it and I can't see what happens next.
It looks like a good book, and every book I have read does but I wish they were all finished.