So touchy... any1 after reading going to cry like me...
So touchy... any1 after reading going to cry like me...
Very nicely done. I have heard of similar stories. One was even done with the old man being Jesus at the end. Very nicely done and yep, I wanted more just like michelleb123....
I loved your story, I wish you would have made it longer tho:) The ending made me wanting to see just what had happened in the main character's life brought him to the old man, and what exact influence after this experience changed the main character's life.
I was worried for a moment that we were about to run into transubstantiation issues... but was relieved not to have gone there.
Very good job.
Oldsalt,
You have written a very beautiful, touching and unique story.
Excellent writing!
This is a wonderful story you've written.
If only more people in the world had the heart to do as this man did, the world would be as it was intended to be. Very touching and with a very good lesson for all to learn. Thx for sharing.
i loved ur story ! it kinda killed me at the end though