Amazing story you have to finish it :)

plz write more

plzz keep on writing!! :D

you should make a seiqule cause this is the best book so far that ive read good job :)

So beautiful. That's is all I can think of.

this book is so good. It's intoxicating. I love ti how she has all this power and is just realizing that she had it. Man I know if i was her and mr. croft put his hands on e I would have kicked his butt too.

I have finished chapter 2 and added it to the story!! ENJOY!

I love what u had so far plzzzzz add more its really good

I would Love to hear what you think of the book so far!! I will have the next chapter up soon so please Comment and Rate!! Tahnks