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I need some reviews on my books....anyone
"Some secrets are best kept within know whom to trust, Snakes are not worms."
© DEU' Angel
To be whole
© DEU' Angel
All of Life is within me,
All of me is within Life......
I do not need to pretend to know I'm imperfect,
But to find my true self,
Broken, cut, damaged,
This outward circumstance keeps me in the shadows.......
A little piece of me gone,
Oh I yearn to be fixed,
To have and to crave wholeness,
They say none is,
I desire to be perfect,
To be made whole.
My missing piece became my dark side,
To see where lies my faith,
I... mehr anzeigen
the only way a man can be close to perfect is to walk in the spirit of God . Man's ways are not the ways of God, The whole book of the Bible concludes in three words Love thy Neighbors . bless those that curse you and if your enemies thirst give him water. violence is never the... mehr anzeigen
Yes, Love is mans true being
Stolen Waters
This eye can tell a story;
I can't say sorry for every single thing I did,
I could yield to reason,
yet again.........
Found my way into its depths,
To feel pleasure,
Then to know suffering, struggle and defeat.
It's taste sweet as nectar,
Beautiful flower, Blossoming day and night,
Wrestling yet so gently,
Playing to its tunes,
The seduction of my soul,
To stop........
But fall reaching the bottom of a fiery-red abyss.
© DEU' Angel
pm me lol
She must have went down at sea,
Just to get away from here,
Her deeds and dreams now strength less,
As she reappears without air.
Look!!!
Lips, hands and legs perfectly bonded,
This must have been the work of an ill-wisher,
I can't stop these tears,
As my crew and I bid farewell to this stranger.
- Mystic encounter
I once knew a lonely old man,
One hand and leg with no ears to hear,
His heart was an element of blank,
He said;
"I've held others before, it was never like this,
I've walked a thousand miles, I never had to hop,
With my senses I once yearned to sail in the harmonic desire of bliss. "
And I asked;
"What happened?"
He replied;
"Whenever you look at me and you see that sweet smile, know it was I who saved you."
How still the truth deceives,
Religion, Politics and Social ethics,
New Earth Control as we know it.
Some things that we ignore there is,
Do not try to question me but seek them,
One and two running in thousands the Prophets fall,
All to make these conspiracies remain asleep!
Of all the books on your "Favorites" list, you've only bothered to leave one very brief remark on someone else's story. We all need reviews. One of the purposes of this site is getting the input and insight other writers offer.
If you want reviews, start giving some, and more... mehr anzeigen
Of all the books on your "Favorites" list, you've only bothered to leave one very brief remark on someone else's story. We all need reviews. One of the purposes of this site is getting the input and insight other writers offer.
If you want reviews, start giving some, and more than just a quick sentence indicating that you liked it. A review includes way more than that. I'd be happy to take the time to read and review your stories if you would at least try to give the rest of us the same courtesy.
Thanks for understanding.
Thank you for the information Judy.....I understand clearly
Deu' take this as a constructive criticism review. You need an editor or more eyes to look at your book and point out the things that need some fixing before placing them for sale. Readers these days want, if not perfect, a good product in their hands.
thank you Alpha