Reading this book has been very inovating and challeging for me being in the state of bring a new life into this world. It brings up a lot of situations that could be proposed to my son. It must have taken so much out of the writer to be so honest and forth-right about life.

I pray you will excuse my archaeic philosophies, comments, and diction; but I feel compelled to leave my thoughts here.

Your story is intriguing, touches the heart, mind, and spirit, but more than anything: It is not over. I believe it was best said by Firion of Fynn that we are to "Persist in the present, and believe in the future". As well as by Laguna Loire, "Love, hope, friendships and dreams may sound cheesy, but that's what keeps us going." I am probably misquoting him on this account but he said something along those lines.
Anyway, all this is an extremely long winded way of saying your story is decidedly one worth telling but its true end has not yet occured. With this roundabout statement, I conclude to say this: I wish you the best in this story, and that joy may continue to find you in the quiet moments of life.

As I have now made a bumbling fool of myself, I'll fall silent.
May life show its kinder side,

-Keiran Gomlok

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This is a very goood book! I voted for it! I really like it and I will read it millions of times!

You have beautifully expressed the emotions of a teenager which always go unnoticed by the parents. It is true, you have vent out your hidden feelings to be free.

Writing this book has been the most therapeutic thing for me. It means everything to me that you have all taken the time out to give me feedback on my story. Thank you so much!

When I read this book, it reminded me of the struggles i had in my life. It really made me cry to see how much effort you put into this sad book. Thank you for sending the message to me in my inbox about the book. It is really great!

I gave you a vote. I wanted to mention a few errors.

Page 5
He became terribly insecure and, unfortunately for my mother…”
Eliminate the comma after and place it after ‘insecure’.

Page 11
This place was so despicable to me, I felt it didn’t (you wrote ‘disserve’ it’s ‘deserved’) a name.

Thanks for sharing a touching story about the harsh reality of life and how one must deal with it. =-)

I had to go in and look at your age.
Your talent and life-lessons/growth surely indicated to me, that you were much older.
This was beautifully put together, with all the bells and whistles a person likes to see in a well written piece.
Your new-found peace and joy is contagious...the ending gave me chills.

Best to you