Is it working now ?

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Lauren

my computer keeps me signed in silly willy! haha and i know why..O.O its cuz youre OBSESSED WITH ME! :O

FROM LUCILLE JOSEPH:

Thanks for being in Alys book, i appriciate it! i mite make an acount on here and rite coments on alys books instead of riting comnts on her account i do that when she is away doing somtin

Wow loved what you put :)

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Lauren

Its good :) I've added a bit dunno if its up, think it is xxxxxxxxxxxx

Lauren

It was great and I can't wait to read more!

i liked your new update on semi shifters i think you should continue this as a chapter

I've read books bye professinals who have chapters in their books that are like a page and a half long and its not the prologue. so I think its fine. With me as long as it sounds good, and gets the point across for that chapter, then its fine. I like it the way it is. Whit my book What He Did To Me, its like 16 bookrix pages and it already has 5 or 6 chapters in it. And I like it the way it is. Sometimes chapters are meant to be that way. Short and sweet. Or just short, depending apon the type of book your writing. Does that help a little?

I like the chapter the way it is, but its up to you. Your the writer. ^_^

hey check out my new book called hurt by my mother and father and comment on it and pass it on plz i need to know what people think about it i need a lot of people help so can you help a girl out :)