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skulker

GREAT BOOK!!!!!

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mshorror

Thank you for stopping by and reading my story!

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bettyc

This reminded me of my daughter's attachment to her teddy bear.

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paulashene

My son, the illustrator, while he didn't keep his 'stuffed' animals quite so long did have a hard time letting his class go. He would read to them after putting them in a half circle....p

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mshorror

Thank you for much for reading my story and for helpful advice.

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cavlaster

This story is so cute. I have two plush animals, one a Rhino and a turtle which I've had for nine years. They are now my children's treasure, each one sleeps with one and cares for them. Thanks for sharing this sweet true story.

On any errors factor, I saw that your missing a few commas. For example, in dialogue you need to place a comma before and after a name or endearment in a sentence. "Hey, blah blah..." "Stop it, ana,... mehr anzeigen

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mshorror

Thank you for sharing that wonderful story. Also thank you so much for reading my story.

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desertstars

I also have a daughter who is seventeen . She also had a Simba,I should say has,that she took everywhere with her. He was her best friend. We even drove 4 hours after leaving a by accident in a motel bed. We were 4 hours from our starting point and a little under 3 hours from home. My daughter could not imagine Simba being left by himself and worse still being shoved into a box to be mailed to us. So we turned around and got... mehr anzeigen

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desertstars

I also have a daughter who is seventeen . She also had a Simba,I should say has,that she took everywhere with her. He was her best friend. We even drove 4 hours after leaving a by accident in a motel bed. We were 4 hours from our starting point and a little under 3 hours from home. My daughter could not imagine Simba being left by himself and worse still being shoved into a box to be mailed to us. So we turned around and got... mehr anzeigen

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mshorror

I want to thank everyone for reading my story! Thank you so much!

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