Did you ever get a smudge of food on your face and not realize it, only to find out later when you look in the mirror? And did you wonder what kind of friends you have who wouldn't tell you, and let you look stupid? Well, pointing out this mistake is kinda the same thing. I'm not being mean, I'm just trying to be a friend.
In the description of your group, Becoming The Wolf That Is Inside You, you say, "This is a group that... mehr anzeigen
Did you ever get a smudge of food on your face and not realize it, only to find out later when you look in the mirror? And did you wonder what kind of friends you have who wouldn't tell you, and let you look stupid? Well, pointing out this mistake is kinda the same thing. I'm not being mean, I'm just trying to be a friend.
In the description of your group, Becoming The Wolf That Is Inside You, you say, "This is a group that can revile the wolf that is in all of us."
"Revile" means to hate, or gross out, to shun or harshly criticize. I think what you meant was "reveal" which means to show, or make aware of. Also, "descus" is not a word. I believe you want "discuss."
Hope this helps. ')
thanks that does help a lot they were just misspelling thanks again i'll get it fixed
You're welcome. After having made a number of similar errors myself in posts and blurbs, I started to realize that proof-reading even a simple message is as important as proof-reading my stories. ')
thanks again