omg that was t5he greatest story i ever read and believe me i read alot of story finish it it would be amazing i juss no it will

this is very good and i cannot wait until you finish it ! :)
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good job, i loved it

luv it pleles write more

omg i luv it plealse write more it is asome

I LOVED IT!!!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!! IS THERE GOING TO BE ANY MORE????

nice book finish soon please!!!!

i love this book and plz make another one it is relly relly good and deserves a gold meadle and the errors, i think we all know what they mean

<3 ashley o'bannon

Great book

i think its finished know all you should do is make a second one of she gets davids head on a stick!!