Good Luck, this was Beautiful!!! Wow, I want to read lots more of what you've written. You will definitely be getting my Votes ... You can sure Write!!!

As promised, came back to vote for this very deserving entry.

Really, this Flash entry has everything. My vote!

This is such a beautifully written and touching story. You have my vote! Fantastic.

Well written and edited, beautifully done. This is a perfect example of "short and sweet" and a story that "packs a punch." This is a perfect example of what flash fiction is meant to be. This will get one of my votes. Well done!

It sent shivers down my spine as i read it. What a beautiful, heart wrenching story.

BTW To leave just your cover, edit the book, find step 4 and mark the box 'use picture only'. Will get rid of bookrix words.

Maybe the most appropriate word for this heart rending story. The artistic way you put the perfect words into the narrative is impressive. There is a seeming effortlessness to your prose. Lean, yet at the same time so full. My hat's off to you.
Exceptional writing.

I had to make up an acronym for this since I think it every time I read your work,

I always think... Man! I Wish I WROTE THAT

Ironic twists can be more fun than violent ones

This is an IWIWT story!!

(Pronounced "EE Wit")

Absolutely beautiful, Michelle. Well written, no errors, with a surprise ending that made me smile. I hope you enter this in the current Flash Fiction contest. You will have my vote.