As much as I like this story and would like to get it published its my first book. like ever attempting or writing. Ive learned so much since I wrote this and Im glad you liked it although this is as good as im going to make it.
This is pretty good. If you don't mind some constructive criticism, I think that after you revise this story, (I noticed that you were switching back and forth between past and present tense and between first person and third person perspectives, few misspellings, paragraphing errors, etc.) and maybe add in more details to maybe make the story a little more anticipating, you should definitely get it published or something. I... mehr anzeigen
If you enjoyed 'The Summer I Found Myself' then I know you will enjoy the newest book I'm writing 'Under the Summer Sky'. Go to my page and click on it for a good read. Feedback is not just well liked its encouraged.
Oh I am so close to finishing that it's crazy. I hope you enjoy it and again, I will send a personal message to anyone that favorites or comments on the book when it's finally finished. Thank you all for the support and for being behind what I do. NATALIA, You are NOT forgotten. For being the first person to send me Fan Mail, You will get your name in this book one way or another.
i hope u finsih this if u havent already
i hope u finsih this if u havent already
It was pretty good but you could defianantly tell it wasnt professional.